Moves

We are learning persuasive writing and writing our opinion. 

Hawaiki wrote:

In my opinion small children should not drive.

They don’t know how to drive.

They might die.

Wijay wrote:

My opinion is that children should not drive cars.

It is dangerous and the children will be in a very bad incident.

They will end up in hospital.
                                
                               Can  I keep it?

 Aaliyah wrote:              

I think the boy can’t keep the fish.

The fish will die.

If the boy took the fish home it will die.

Tia wrote:

I prefer that the boy shouldn’t keep the fish.

The fish will die.

Fish need water.